In Korea, there is sand dusts in spring.

2010-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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In Korea, there is sand dusts in spring. It is made from China, the upper area of Yellow River. We hate it very much. It cause many problems in the bronchus.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!   I have researched a little about the yellow dust that you are experiencing in Korea. The dust originates from Mongolia, Northern China and Kazakhstan due to dust storms occurring in these particular regions. It has become a problem because it brings pollutants that affects the air and gives certain respiratory diseases. Anyway, I hope you and your family will not be badly affected by this phenomenon. See you on Monday!!   T. Shy   In Korea, there is sand dusts in spring.>> In Korea, there are sand dusts in spring. It is made from China, the upper area of Yellow River.>> It came from China, on the upper area of the Yellow River. It cause many problems in the bronchus. >> It causes many problems in the bronchus.

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