In many cultures, women cook more often than men. Why is this so?
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In many cultures, women cook more often than men. Why is this so?
Of course, usually men are the ones who earn money.
Women should cook and take care of babies.
If women do not want to cook, they should work and earn more money than men.
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Thank you for answering your homework!
I also agree but sometimes we can switch roles.
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Of course, usually men are the ones who earn money.
>>Men are usually the ones who earn money.
Women should cook and take care of babies.
>>CORRECT
If women do not want to cook, they should work and earn more money than men.
>> CORRECT
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