In many workplaces, creativity and imagination are becoming more valued than technical expertise. Wh
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In many workplaces, creativity and imagination are becoming more valued than technical expertise.
I think the development of machine learning causes this situation.
For example, in my country, many app developers have suffered from unemployment since Open AI appeared.
Most companies want to hire the developers who can manage and revise programming languages well because Open AI can already deal with them.
It means technical expertise is no longer important compared to the past.
It might help companies get benefits, but I think it will have negative effects on societies.
To be a creative and imaginary person, I think we should have basic technical expertise.
That\'s why senior developers can utilize Open AI because they already have strength to deal with it.
In conclusion, sufficient and proper education and training is needed before we require creativity and imagination to newcomers.
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In many workplaces, creativity and imagination are becoming more valued than technical expertise.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
I think the development of machine learning causes this situation.
I think the development of machine learning causes this situation.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
For example, in my country, many app developers have suffered from unemployment since Open AI appeared.
For example, in my country, many app developers have suffered from unemployment since Open AI appeared.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Most companies want to hire the developers who can manage and revise programming languages well because Open AI can already deal with them.
Most companies want to hire the developers who can manage and revise programming languages well because Open AI can already deal with them.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
It means technical expertise is no longer important compared to the past.
It means technical expertise is no longer important compared to the past.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
It might help companies get benefits, but I think it will have negative effects on societies.
It might help companies get benefits, but I think it will have negative effects on societies.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
To be a creative and imaginary person, I think we should have basic technical expertise.
To be a creative and imaginary person, I think we should have basic technical expertise.
>>> I believe that to be truly creative and imaginative, one must first have a solid foundation in technical expertise.
That\'s why senior developers can utilize Open AI because they already have strength to deal with it.
That\'s why senior developers can utilize Open AI because they already have strength to deal with it.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
In conclusion, sufficient and proper education and training is needed before we require creativity and imagination to newcomers.
In conclusion, sufficient and proper education and training is needed before we require creativity and imagination to newcomers.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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