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Our memorial day is related to a part of our history. As you know we are the only nation which is seperated. Now, it is easy to say that we are living in south Korea but when the wartime between North and South, It was very hard to confirm. because we nearly defeated in the war. but the help of UN, and many nations (including Pillipines) we could be an indepandant nation. Without their help, exertion, blood, We wouldn't be here with freedom. So we have a memorial day for many soldier who participated the war , or died from the battle feild. In every province have a memorial place which remind us their sacrifice. My grand father was one of the member who wounded leg from the war. Now he is living on heaven, but I yearly visit his place to appreciate to him with my fammily. Not only for our family but many other family do this ways.

Hi [이름]! Wow! What a lovely story! Your grandfather is really a hero. ^_^ It\'s nice to hear that story today. It is important to show appreciation towards others. Thanks again. Talk to you soon. Teacher Nina   Our memorial day is related to a part of our history. >> CorrectAs you know we are the only nation which is seperated. >> CorrectNow, it is easy to say that we are living in south Korea but when the wartime between North and South, It was very hard to confirm. >> Now, it easy to say that we are living in South Korea but during the war between North and South, it was very hard to confirm. because we nearly defeated in the war. >> Because we were nearly defeated during the war.but the help of UN, and many nations (including Pillipines) we could be an indepandant nation. >> But with the help of the UN and many nations (including the Philippines), we could be an independent nation. Without their help, exertion, blood, We wouldn\'t be here with freedom. >> Correct >> OR: Without their help, exertion and blood, we wouldn\'t have freedom.So we have a memorial day for many soldier who participated the war , or died from the battle feild. >> So, we have a memorial day for many soldiers who participated in the war or died during the battle. In every province have a memorial place which remind us their sacrifice.>> In every province, we have a memorial place which reminds us about their sacrifice. My grand father was one of the member who wounded leg from the war. >> My grandfather was one of the members who got wounded during the war. >> OR: My grandfather was one of the members who was wounded on the leg during the war. Now he is living on heaven, but I yearly visit his place to appreciate to him with my fammily. >> Now, he is on heaven, but I yearly visit his place to show my appreciation with my family. Not only for our family but many other family do this ways. >> Not only our family does it but others too.