In my diary!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today was the sports day. So, I woke up early in the morning, put on my makeup, and did my hair at school with my friends. My class was not good at physical education, so I cheered really hard to get a cheering award. I literally shout a lot. Thanks to the unity of our class, our class finished first out of 10 classes.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Today was the sports day.
>>> CORRECT!
So, I woke up early in the morning, put on my makeup, and did my hair at school with my friends.
>>> CORRECT!
My class was not good at physical education, so I cheered really hard to get a cheering award. I literally shout a lot.
>>> CORRECT!
Thanks to the unity of our class, our class finished first out of 10 classes.
>>> CORRECT!
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