In my hometown\'s home, I have my own room.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my hometown\'s home, I have my own room.
Sometimes, I want to take a rest without any hindrance.
So, I often wrote \'I\'m resting!\' on a paper, and put it on the door.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara,
Andrea
Sometimes, I want to take a rest without any hindrance.
My room is my safe haven.
It\'s the only place where I can rest.
Andrea
In my hometown\'s home, I have my own room.
>> I have my own room in our house in our hometown.
Sometimes, I want to take a rest without any hindrance.
>> Sometimes, I want to take a rest without any disturbance.
So, I often wrote \'I\'m resting!\' on a paper, and put it on the door.
>> Correct
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