In my idea The best invention is electricity
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invention of electricity is great invention in the world since starting human being
before days we did\'t have electricity so we lived in dark..
but after we had electricity we were not scared the midnight. and a lot of stuff were invented to base on electricity
so the great invention is electricity that I think still
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invention of electricity is great invention in the world since starting human being
>>The inventions of electricity is the greatest invention in the world since the start of humans.
before days we did\'t have electricity so we lived in dark..
>>In the days before, we didn\'t have electricity so we lived in the dark.
>>But, we since have electricity, we are not scared at night.
and a lot of stuff were invented to base on electricity
>>A lot of things were invented based on electricity.
>>So the greatest invention is electricity in my opinion.
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