in my office...

2010-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jammie

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hi, there. it's me. now, it's a 8 O'clock. ㅜㅜ I read the your recommend. thanks for your cooperation. I hope to contact you tomorrow morning. today, it is a very boring day. I want to go home...but before get off the office, i have to solve my task. So i look forward to weekend. Ah!! this sunday, i'll have a soccer match. you know, I love soccer. every sunday, i join the soccer club. HAHAHA~ i wonder what sport is famous in your country. pls let me know about it. So Jaimme, take care od yourself. Health is most important above all things. Have a sweet, great, fantastic day. Bye~~~~~~~~~ Ps. you know, you are the best teacher to me. ^^;;

강사 첨삭

Hello Nick! It's nice to hear from you. Thank you for the concern and your compliment doesn't hurt too. ^.^ Anyway, everything's fine. I do hope to talk to you soon.   hi, there. it's me.>> correctnow, it's a 8 O'clock. ㅜㅜ>> correctI read the your recommend. >> I read your suggestion.  thanks for your cooperation.>> correctI hope to contact you tomorrow morning.>> correcttoday, it is a very boring day.>> correctI want to go home... >> correct but before get off the office, i have to solve my task. >> but before I get off the office, I have to finish my task.So i look forward to weekend.>> So, I look forward to the weekend.Ah!! this sunday, i'll have a soccer match. you know, I love soccer.>> correctevery sunday, i join the soccer club. HAHAHA~>> correcti wonder what sport is famous in your country.>> correctpls let me know about it.>> correctSo Jaimme, take care od yourself. >> So Jammie, take care of yourself.  Health is most important above all things.>> Health is the most important above all things.Have a sweet, great, fantastic day.Bye~~~~~~~~~>> correct!Ps. you know, you are the best teacher to me. ^^;;>> correct!!!!

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