In my opinion
학생이 쓴 원문
I wasn't sure what I expained to you yesterday.
It's about the meaning of "sa".
I use CC instead of Chinese character below this composition.
Korean, Chinese and Japanese include CC.
As you know, we already have our language "Han-geul".
But we used to use only CC once upon a time.
Now we don't often use CC but the pronunciations remain.
We write down "Han-geul" which comes from pronunciations of CC with the same meaning
One of them is "sa".
"Sa" is the same pronunciation as CC which means "death" and number 4 in Korea.
We use a little CC in our life in order to make shorter something to write down.
Thesedays there are some buildings which have 4th floor.
Is it right? I'm feeling stuffy.
I need more words : b
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for explaining futher about “Sa-mang”.
I also like to learn new things everyday.
If I may ask. What does “CC” stands for?
In my corrections the words inside the parenthesis can be kept in the sentence
but better to be illiminated.
I guess you just miss the spelling of ‘our’ in your 11th sentence, but I know you know how to spell it. There are just few minimal corrections Kk^0^
-Tiny^0^
I wasn't sure what I expained to you yesterday.
>>correctIt's about the meaning of "sa".
>>correctI use CC instead of Chinese character below this composition.
>> I used CC instead of Chinese character below this composition.
Korean, Chinese and Japanese include CC.
>>CC includes Korean, Chinese and Japanese.
As you know, we already have our language "Han-geul".
>>correctBut we used to use only CC once upon a time.
>>correctNow we don't often use CC but the pronunciations remain.
>>correctWe write down "Han-geul" which comes from pronunciations of CC with the same meaning
>> We write (down) using "Han-geul" which comes from the pronunciations of CC and with the same meaning
One of them is "sa".
>>correct"Sa" is the same pronunciation as CC which means "death" and number 4 in Korea.
>>"Sa" is pronounced the same in CC which means "death" and number 4 in Han-geul.
We use a little CC in out life in order to make shorter something to write down.
>> We use a little CC (in our life) in order to make something shorter to write down.
Thesedays there are some buildings which have 4th floor.
>> These days there are some buildings which have 4th floor.
Is it right? I'm feeling stuffy.
>>correct^0^I need more words : b
>>correct
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