In my opinion

2011-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I wasn't sure what I expained to you yesterday. It's about the meaning of "sa". I use CC instead of Chinese character below this composition. Korean, Chinese and Japanese include CC. As you know, we already have our language "Han-geul". But we used to use only CC once upon a time. Now we don't often use CC but the pronunciations remain. We write down "Han-geul" which comes from pronunciations of CC with the same meaning One of them is "sa". "Sa" is the same pronunciation as CC which means "death" and number 4 in Korea. We use a little CC in our life in order to make shorter something to write down. Thesedays there are some buildings which have 4th floor. Is it right? I'm feeling stuffy. I need more words : b

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for explaining futher about  “Sa-mang”. I also like to learn new things everyday. If I may ask. What does “CC” stands for? In my corrections the words inside the parenthesis can be kept in the sentence but better to be illiminated. I guess you just miss the spelling of ‘our’ in your 11th sentence, but I know you know how to spell it. There are just few minimal corrections Kk^0^ -Tiny^0^ I wasn't sure what I expained to you yesterday. >>correctIt's about the meaning of "sa". >>correctI use CC instead of Chinese character below this composition. >> I used CC instead of Chinese character below this composition. Korean, Chinese and Japanese include CC. >>CC includes Korean, Chinese and Japanese. As you know, we already have our language "Han-geul". >>correctBut we used to use only CC once upon a time. >>correctNow we don't often use CC but the pronunciations remain. >>correctWe write down "Han-geul" which comes from pronunciations of CC with the same meaning >> We write (down) using "Han-geul" which comes from the pronunciations of CC and with the same meaning One of them is "sa". >>correct"Sa" is the same pronunciation as CC which means "death" and number 4 in Korea. >>"Sa" is pronounced the same in CC which means "death" and number 4 in Han-geul. We use a little CC in out life in order to make shorter something to write down. >> We use a little CC (in our life) in order to make something shorter to write down. Thesedays there are some buildings which have 4th floor. >> These days there are some buildings which have 4th floor. Is it right? I'm feeling stuffy. >>correct^0^I need more words : b >>correct

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