In not more than ten sentences, write an essay stating the worst thing about the internet
학생이 쓴 원문
1,I always have a smartphone in my hand for no reason. 2,I don\'t know What I\'m looking for something. 3,I try to search in the internet. 4,My grandsun likes to see You Tube in spite of 1 year old. 5,
강사 첨삭
How are you doing Miss. [Name]?
I hope you started your day right! ^^
I am looking forward to talking with you later.
See you!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
1,I always have a smartphone in my hand for no reason.
>>> Correct! [OR: I always carry my smartphone for no special reason.]
2,I don\'t know What I\'m looking for something.
3,I try to search in the internet.
>>> I use it to search the internet for information.
4,My grandsun likes to see You Tube in spite of 1 year old. 5,
>>> My grandson likes to watch videos on YouTube even though he\'s just one-year old.
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