In order to manage my time well, I make to do list everyday.

2020-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Are you good at managing your time? How do you manage your time wisely? Well, I am not sure that I am good at managing my time. But it is very important for me to manage my time properly. In order to manage my time well, I make to do list everyday. As I am getting old my memory is getting worse. Sometimes I forgot to do something important currently. So to prevent this error, everyday in the morning I make a to do list. And afterwards I finish the work I check it. And before finishing my work time I make a memo the list which is not finished by today and to do list on tomorrow. That\'s the way that I manage my time.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir JY. Thank you once again for this. Making a list of things you need to do is indeed helpful. Keep it up!
- T. Beth
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Well, I am not sure that I am good at managing my time. 
>>> Well, I am not sure if I am good at managing my time.    
But it is very important for me to manage my time properly. 
>>> correct   
In order to manage my time well, I make to do list everyday.
>>>  In order to manage my time well, I make a to do list everyday.  
As I am getting old my memory is getting worse. 
>>> correct   
Sometimes I forgot to do something important currently. 
>>> Sometimes, I forget to do something important.    
So to prevent this error, everyday in the morning I make a to do list. 
>>> correct ( So to prevent this error, everyday in the morning, I make a to do list. )   
And afterwards I finish the work I check it. 
>>> And after I finish the work I check it.    
And before finishing my work time I make a memo the list which is not finished by today and to do list on tomorrow. 
>>>In addition, before finishing my work time, I make a memo on the list of things which were not finished by today and include them in the to do list for tomorrow.  
That\'s the way that I manage my time.
>>>  correct  

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