In our country, there are some common practices. First, the birthday person pays for the dinner whe
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In our country, there are some common practices.
First, the birthday person pays for the dinner when he does birthday party with their friends. And friends who attend the party prepare a cake and a present. In that case, there are two options to prepare the gift. They can bring gift each, or they can gather money and buy an expensive gift together.
And if people do a birthday party with their family, their parents make sea mustard soup in the birthday morning. And eat it together. It’s very common and traditional to have a sea mustard soup during birthdays.
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In our country, there are some common practices.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are some common practices in my country.
First, the birthday person pays for the dinner when he does birthday party with their friends.
>>> First, the birthday celebrant pays for the dinner when he does a birthday party with their friends.
And friends who attend the party prepare a cake and a present.
>> CORRECT!
In that case, there are two options to prepare the gift.
>> CORRECT!
They can bring gift each, or they can gather money and buy an expensive gift together.
>> Each one can bring a gift, or they can gather money and buy an expensive gift together.
OR >> Each one can bring a gift, or they can collect money and buy an expensive gift together.
And if people do a birthday party with their family, their parents make sea mustard soup in the birthday morning.
>> And, if people do a birthday party with their family, their parents make a sea mustard soup in the morning of their birthday, and eat it together.
And eat it together.
>> And, if people do a birthday party with their family, their parents make a sea mustard soup in the morning of their birthday, and eat it together.
It’s very common and traditional to have a sea mustard soup during birthdays.
>> CORRECT!
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