In Seoul, where I live,
학생이 쓴 원문
In Seoul, where I live,
Seoul goverments operated a city bus which rare double-decker bus, the top floor is open without a ceiling.
This bus tours each trade mark and representative tourist attractions in Seoul.
Probably I remember, it was about $13.
This buses are very useful for foreigners even thought to korean.
Korean commonly use this bus for tour in seoul.
Program is very verified. For example, palace tours, shopping mall tours, and landmark tours. Etc..
I haven\'t never used this bus yet.
If I have a chance someday, I want to tour Seoul by this double-decker bus.
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Hi [이름]!
Yeah, same here.
I would also visit Seoul and go shopping spree!
In Seoul, where I live, Seoul goverments operated a city bus which rare double-decker bus, the top floor is open without a ceiling.
>>> In Seoul, where I live, the Seoul Metropolitan Government operates a double-decker bus, and the top floor is open without a ceiling.
This bus tours each trade mark and representative tourist attractions in Seoul.
>>> This bus tour represents tourist attractions in Seoul.
Probably I remember, it was about $13.
>>> I remember it was about $13.
This buses are very useful for foreigners even thought to korean.
>>> This bus is very useful even for Koreans.
Korean commonly use this bus for tour in seoul.
>>> Koreans often use this bus to tour in Seoul.
Program is very verified.
>>> The program has been very verified.
For example, palace tours, shopping mall tours, and landmark tours. Etc..
>>> The buses visits the palace, shopping malls, and other tourist attractions.
I haven\'t never used this bus yet.
>>> I haven\'t taken this bus yet.
If I have a chance someday, I want to tour Seoul by this double-decker bus.
>>> If I have a chance someday, I want to take this double-decker bus to tour Seoul.
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