In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the c

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I think this problem was from difference of wage and diversity of job. 

>>> I think this problem resulted from the difference of wage and diversity of jobs.
Most people hope to get a job they want.

>>> Correct!

To achieve their dreams, they will move other cities which offer better chance than rular cites.

>>> To achieve their dreams, they move to other cities which offer better chances.
It lead to make a complex the big cities.

>>> It causes complexities in big cities.
In korea, To solve this problem, The goverment make an effort to expand public translation like a bus and subway. 

>>> In Korea, to solve this problem, the government makes an effort to expand public transportations like buses and subways. 
And The policeman control traffic lights during the rush hours. 

>>> And policemen control the traffic lights during the rush hours.
It is very effective way rather than I envisioned.

>>> It is a far more effective way than I envisioned.