In some countries, celebrities complain about the way the media publicizes their private lives. Some

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Put quite starkly, celebrities cannot help accepting it.

>>> Put quite starkly, celebrities have little choice but to accept this reality.

Being a famous person means everybody knows my face everywhere I go.

>>> Being a famous person means that your face is recognized almost everywhere you go.

Of course, people should try not to violate celebrities\' privacy, but celebrities can\'t avoid their some private life to be exposed.

>>>> Ideally, people should respect celebrities’ privacy; however, in practice, it is nearly impossible for public figures to keep all aspects of their personal lives hidden.

Because many people note celebrities\' private lives, celebrities always live with rumors.

>>> Because so many people pay close attention to celebrities, their private lives are constantly under scrutiny, often giving rise to rumors.

Rumors sometimes can be fortune or sometimes can be toxic.

>>> These rumors can sometimes work in their favor, but they can also be toxic.

If celebrities don\'t want to be exposed to bad rumors, they should be careful for their behaviors and words.

>>> If celebrities wish to avoid being exposed to harmful rumors, they must be especially mindful of their behavior and the words they choose. 

It\'s pretty sad things but it\'s also the price of fame.

>>> It is quite unfortunate, but it is ultimately one of the inevitable costs of fame.