In some cultures old people are valued more, while in other cultures youth is considered more valuab
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think these issues are necessary to discuss because we know that every human should be respected and it is stated at the first sentence in the law. However, it is still controversial issues that who are more important. In our country, we used to think that old people are valued more than young people. I have been taught that I had to respect elderly without any explanation when I was child. That is our culture that we have to respect old people so we have special word that we use for elderly. At home, if we have a meal with family members, nobody can start eating before the oldest person begin to eat. When we use the public transportation, young people have to offer his/her seat to old people, if we didn\'t, elderly usually shout at young people and blame them. Because they think that these are their privilege. I think that it is important to respect elderly but they also need to act properly that young people would like to respect old people in their deep heart.
강사 첨삭
HAPPY TUESDAY Mr. [이름]~! ^^
Tuesdays are a chance for a new beginning and a new perspective, so make them count. Study smart and give your best in everything. Have a good one!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I don\'t think these issues are necessary to discuss because we know that every human should be respected and it is stated at the first sentence in the law.
>>> CORRECT
However, it is still controversial issues that who are more important.
>>> However, it is still a controversial issue whether who is more important.
In our country, we used to think that old people are valued more than young ones.
>>> CORRECT
I have been taught that I had to respect the elderly without any explanation when I was a child.
>>> CORRECT
It is our culture that we have to respect old people so we have special words to use for the elderly.
>>> CORRECT
At home, if we eat meals with our family members, nobody can start eating until the oldest person has begun to eat.
>>> CORRECT
When we use the public transportation, young people have to offer his/her seat to old people, if we didn\'t, the elderly usually shout at young people and blame them.
>>> CORRECT
Because they think that these are their privileges.
>>> CORRECT
I think that it is important to respect the elderly but they also need to act properly so that young people would respect them too deep in their hearts.
>>> CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.