In spite of March, it was snowing yesterday.

2010-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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In spite of March, it was snowing yesterday. This snow must be zealous spring. Anyway, I missed my class because of meeting. After meeting, I had dinner and drink with them. I had drink very much yesterday. Because of it, I feel so bad today. Before long I will be good I expect.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!   I heard from most of my students that it is snowing very hard in Korea.. I thought winter is over? Anyway, on your composition above, you said "This snow must be zealous spring" The word 'zealous' means enthusiastic, devoted or active. So I don't think zealous is the right word. I need to know what you mean exactly.. See you later!   T. Shy   In spite of March, it was snowing yesterday. >> In spite the fact that it is already March, it was snowing yesterday. I missed my class because of meeting.>> I missed my class because of a meeting. After meeting, I had dinner and drink with them.>> Afterthe  meeting, I had dinner and drink with them. I had drink very much yesterday.>> I had drunk very much yesterday. Before long I will be good I expect. >>  I exepect to feel good soon.    

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