In spite of March, it was snowing yesterday.
학생이 쓴 원문
In spite of March, it was snowing yesterday.
This snow must be zealous spring.
Anyway,
I missed my class because of meeting.
After meeting, I had dinner and drink with them.
I had drink very much yesterday.
Because of it, I feel so bad today.
Before long I will be good I expect.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I heard from most of my students that it is snowing very hard in Korea..
I thought winter is over?
Anyway, on your composition above, you said "This snow must be zealous spring"
The word 'zealous' means enthusiastic, devoted or active.
So I don't think zealous is the right word.
I need to know what you mean exactly..
See you later!
T. Shy
In spite of March, it was snowing yesterday.
>> In spite the fact that it is already March, it was snowing yesterday.
I missed my class because of meeting.>> I missed my class because of a meeting.
After meeting, I had dinner and drink with them.>> Afterthe meeting, I had dinner and drink with them.
I had drink very much yesterday.>> I had drunk very much yesterday.
Before long I will be good I expect.
>> I exepect to feel good soon.
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