In subway, It is very very crowded

I visited the head dffice in Myeong-Dong Now, I work on in the dispatched site In subway, It is very very crowded I didn't move a little in subway I came close to dying as if the compressed cuttlefish In our country It is very crowded in subway in the rush hour But when I have a important meeting, I always use the subway. Because it carry on me in time

Hello [이름]!!!! I really appreciate you for writing on this board everyday.. I hope you won't get tired of it.. Yeah, some of my students say that subway stations in your country are always crowded but the good thing about is its fast and it gets you to your destination on time... See you later!!   Xoxoxo T. Shy   Here are my corrections for you: I visited the head dffice in Myeong-Dong>> I visited the head office in Myeong-Dong Now, I work on in the dispatched site>> Now, I work on the dispatched site In subway, It is very very crowded>> In the subway, It is very very crowded I didn't move a little in subway>> I didn't move a little in the subway >> I can't move even a little in the subway I came close to dying as if the compressed cuttlefish>> I came close to dying like a compressed cuttlefish (I like this part hehe!! Good vocabulary) In our country, it is very crowded in subway in the rush hour>> In our country, it is very crowded in subways during rush hour But when I have a important meeting,>> But when I have an important meeting,I always use the subway.>> CORRECT Because it carry on me in time >> Because it carries me on time