In summer!
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to do things in summer that I can\'t do at other times of the year, like swimming and sleeping under a blanket with the air conditioner on. I don\'t like swimming with water, but I do like going in and having fun with people. And when the air conditioner turns on and it feels a little cold, if you cover it with a thin blanket, the temperature feels just right. These are things you can\'t do in other seasons.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I want to do things in summer that I can\'t do at other times of the year, like swimming and sleeping under a blanket with the air conditioner on.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t like swimming with water, but I do like going in and having fun with people.
>>> I don\'t like swimming in the water, but I do like going in and having fun with people.
And when the air conditioner turns on and it feels a little cold, if you cover it with a thin blanket, the temperature feels just right.
>>> CORRECT!
These are things you can\'t do in other seasons.
>>> CORRECT!
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