In the age of equal rights - is it still necessary for men to hold the door open for ladies and pay
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is not necessary to this way of favor for lady.
In modern society, work that woman and man do does not be distinguished.
woman and man are equal.
So I think woman is not people who have to be protected from man.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. Happy Monday. I\'m glad to read your composition again. This is quite controversial and it is interesting to know your thoughts on this subject. I found it amusing and engaging. ^_^ Maybe, we will have a chance to talk more about it in class. ~ teacher Jane
In modern society, work that woman and man do does not be distinguished.
woman and man are equal.
>>> Women and men are equal.
I think it is not necessary to this way of favor for lady.
>>> I think it is not necessary to favor ladies this way.
In modern society, work that woman and man do does not be distinguished.
>>> In modern society, work that women and men do should not be distinguished.
woman and man are equal.
>>> Women and men are equal.
So I think woman is not people who have to be protected from man.
>>> So I think women should not be protected by men.
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