In the dark!
학생이 쓴 원문
Certainly, I have been worried.
Is there anyone who didn’t got worried alone at night in the dark?
I think life is a series of repetition of happiness and pain.
Maybe, we in the dark can insight ourselves, and see true self.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I provided you with a smoother and more common pattern.
Take note of it.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Certainly, I have been worried.
>> Correct
Is there anyone who didn’t got worried alone at night in the dark?
Is there anyone who didn’t got worried alone at night in the dark?
>> Is there anyone who don\'t get worried alone at night in the dark?
I think life is a series of repetition of happiness and pain.
I think life is a series of repetition of happiness and pain.
>> Correct
Maybe, we in the dark can insight ourselves, and see true self.
Maybe, we in the dark can insight ourselves, and see true self.
>> Maybe, we can have a deeper insight of ourselves and see who we really are in the dark.
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