In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for ind
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This causes the shortage of national pension.
National pension is needed for older people who already retired.
However, the age that we can get national pension is raising because national pension is not enough nowadays.
It might influence older people\'s poverty.
Younger people will also complain about high taxes that they should offer to government.
Then what can government do to solve this problem?
Government should raise the mandatory retirement age.
Both the poverty of older generation and complaint of younger generation can be solved by taking a measure like above.
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National pension is needed for older people who already retired.
However, the age that we can get national pension is raising because national pension is not enough nowadays.
It might influence older people\'s poverty.
Then what can government do to solve this problem?
The government should raise the mandatory retirement age.
Both the poverty of older generation and complaint of younger generation can be solved by taking a measure like above.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
This causes the shortage of national pension.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> This situation is causing a shortage in the national pension system.
National pension is needed for older people who already retired.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> The national pension is essential for older people who have already retired.
However, the age that we can get national pension is raising because national pension is not enough nowadays.
>>> However, the age at which people can receive the national pension is increasing because the available funds are no longer sufficient.
It might influence older people\'s poverty.
>>> This change may contribute to rising poverty among the elderly.
Younger people will also complain about high taxes that they should offer to government.
>>> At the same time, younger people may begin to complain about the high taxes they are required to pay to support the system.
Then what can government do to solve this problem?
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> So, what can the government do to address this problem?
The government should raise the mandatory retirement age.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Both the poverty of older generation and complaint of younger generation can be solved by taking a measure like above.
>>> This measure could help reduce poverty among the older generation and ease the financial burden on younger taxpayers.
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