: In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside the
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It\\\'s revolutionary technology to drive a car with AI program. I believe that the technology will be improved continuously and we might see sky cars, automatic driving cars and drone taxes someday. There have already rolled out cars from Tesla and people can use its function. However, it has been reported that there had been several accident caused by AI driving system. Although, people are worried about the possibilities of accidents, many people are willing to use it and really love it. I can\\\'t understand those people who want to use it without safety guarantees. I will not use this function even if company provide perfect cars because we have had a lot of accidents daily bases. There are million cars on the road and people buy their car based on their budget. If the car have malfunction, what will happen? I don\\\'t want to think about it. Furthermore, I am really worried about the traffic on the sky. Who can control the vehicles? How to provide the traffic sigh on the sky?
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It\'s revolutionary technology to drive a car with AI program.
>>> CORRECT
I believe that the technology will be improved continuously and we might see sky cars, automatic driving cars and drone taxes someday.
>>> I believe that the technology will improve continuously and we might see sky cars, automatic driving cars and drone taxes someday.
There have already rolled out cars from Tesla and people can use its function.
>>> CORRECT
However, it has been reported that there had been several accident caused by AI driving system.
>>> CORRECT
Although, people are worried about the possibilities of accidents, many people are willing to use it and really love it.
>>> CORRECT
I can\'t understand those people who want to use it without safety guarantees.
>>> CORRECT
I will not use this function even if company provide perfect cars because we have had a lot of accidents daily bases.
>>> I will not use this function even if companies will provide perfect cars because we have had a lot of accidents on a daily bases.
There are million cars on the road and people buy their car based on their budget.
>>> There are millions of cars on the road and people buy their car based on their budget.
If the car have malfunction, what will happen?
>>> If the car will malfunction, what will happen?
I don\'t want to think about it.
>>> CORRECT
Furthermore, I am really worried about the traffic on the sky.
>>> Furthermore, I am really worried about the air traffic.
Who can control the vehicles?
>>> CORRECT
How to provide the traffic sigh on the sky?
>>> How can they provide the traffic signs on sky?
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