In the future, will more people prefer renting over buying? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think people always prefer buying when they have enough money even in the future. I think the reason for renting is that I don\'t have enough money or I won\'t use it over one time. However, in the future, becasue the price of house and items will be increased very much considering thesedays\' inflation rate, it might be hard to buy something. As like this reason, we unwillingly have to rent somthing due to high price.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mary! Your answer shows strong logical reasoning about inflation and financial limitations in the future. I like how you clearly explained both preference (buying) and reality (renting due to high prices). This makes your argument balanced and realistic. To improve, focus on future tense (will prefer), plural forms (prices, houses), and natural expressions (for this reason). Overall, your explanation is thoughtful, practical, and well-structured, great job!
-Teacher Wela
I think people always prefer buying when they have enough money even in the future.
>> I think people will still prefer buying if they have enough money, even in the future.
I think the reason for renting is that I don\'t have enough money or I won\'t use it over one time.
>> I think people rent because they don\'t have enough money or they will only use something once.
However, in the future, becasue the price of house and items will be increased very much considering thesedays\' inflation rate, it might be hard to buy something.
>> However, in the future, because the prices of houses and items will increase significantly considering today\'s inflation rate, it might become harder to buy things.
As like this reason, we unwillingly have to rent somthing due to high price.
>> For this reason, people may have to rent unwillingly due to high prices.
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