In the heat of the moment

2016-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I met my daughter, Luna, two years ago for the first time. Luna unexpectedly came out in the world by Caesarean operation because of amniotic fluid insufficiency. I really worried about her, but the operation was successful. When I saw healthy Luna in front of the hospital's neonatal unit, I was in the heat of the moment.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. This is another great example. Well done! However, I changed your sentence from \"I was in the heat of the moment\" to \"I cried in the heat of the moment.\" We usually use \"in the heat of the moment\" to describe something that we do or say without thinking.   So it\'s usually like this, \"I ____ in the heat of the moment.\" I hope you get it now. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ I met my daughter, Luna, two years ago for the first time. >> CORRECT! Luna unexpectedly came out in the world by Caesarean operation because of amniotic fluid insufficiency. >> Luna unexpectedly came out through a Caesarean operation because of an amniotic fluid insufficiency. I really worried about her, but the operation was successful. >> I was really worried about her, but the operation was successful. When I saw healthy Luna in front of the hospital\'s neonatal unit, I was in the heat of the moment. >> When I saw my healthy Luna inside the hospital\'s neonatal unit, I cried in the heat of the moment.

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