In the modern world, can a person get by with only a smartphone? Or do we still need computers to do
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I think every people usally use a smartphone but they still need computers to do somethings because most working peoples use computers, it is more easier than a smartphone.
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I think every people usally use a smartphone but they still need computers to do somethings because most working peoples use computers, it is more easier than a smartphone.
>> I think most people usually use smartphones, but they still need computers for certain tasks because most working people use computers. It is easier to use a computer than a smartphone.
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