In the morning

2014-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Did somebody knock on the door? No, nobody knocked on the door. 2. Did either of the solutions work? No, nothing of the solutions worked. 3. Does anybody here speak English? No, none here speaks English. 4. Are any of your sisters married? No, none of my sisters are married. 5. Did something happen? No, nothing happened. 6. Does either of your brothers live with you? No, none of my brothers lives with me. 7. Do any of your friends smoke? No, none of my friends smoke. 8. Did you see anything? No, I saw nothing. In the morning, I felt tired because of not enough sleep. every one, felt tired. we slept at 2 am. we woke up at 6 am. We left public bath at 7 am. we went to restaurant. He who is pilot, bought breakfast for us. and we said to each other good bye. In near place, I have another friend. so I wanted to see him though I felt tired. I found his place and we talked alot. and we ate meal near his house. I took my bus and went to home.

강사 첨삭

Hello,

You truly are submitting your piled up homework today.^^

Nice one.^^

Just go over the corrections here and I\'ll still check the others.^^

Goodbye!!!!

T. Nina^^


1. Did somebody knock on the door? No, nobody knocked on the door.
>> CORRECT
2. Did either of the solutions work? No, nothing of the solutions worked.
>> Neither
3. Does anybody here speak English? No, none here speaks English.
>> Nobody
4. Are any of your sisters married? No, none of my sisters are married.
>> None
5. Did something happen? No, nothing happened.
>> CORRECT
6. Does either of your brothers live with you? No, none of my brothers lives with me.
>> Neither
7. Do any of your friends smoke? No, none of my friends smoke.
>> CORRECT
8. Did you see anything? No, I saw nothing.
>> CORRECT


In the morning, I felt tired because of not enough sleep.

>> In the morning, I felt tired because of not having enough sleep.
every one, felt tired. we slept at 2 am.

>> All of us are tired because we slept at 2 am.
we woke up at 6 am.

>> Then, we woke up at 6 in the morning.
We left public bath at 7 am.

>> We left the public bath at 7.
we went to restaurant.

>> We went to the restaurant.
He who is pilot, bought breakfast for us.

>>The pilot bought food for our breakfast.
and we said to each other good bye.
>> And, we said goodbye to each other.
In near place, I have another friend.

>> I have another friend at the nearby place.
so I wanted to see him though I felt tired.

>> I wanted to visit him even though I felt tired.
I found his place and we talked a lot.

>> I found his place and we talked about a lot of things.
and we ate meal near his house.

>> We ate our meal near their house.
I took my bus and went to home.

>> I rode a bus and went home.^^

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