In the snow!
학생이 쓴 원문
I can build a snowman in the snow and have a snowball fight. I can also make snow angel shapes while lying down and write on snow. And I can walk barefoot in the snow with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I can build a snowman in the snow and have a snowball fight.
>>> CORRECT!
I can also make snow angel shapes while lying down and write on snow.
>>> I can also make snow angel shapes while lying down and writing on snow.
And I can walk barefoot in the snow with my friends.
>>> CORRECT!
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