In the summer
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ashley^^
I know that summer season is about to come in your country. I hope that you
will still find time to enjoy summer even if you can\'t bear the heat.
I will see you in class later my dear.
Thanks for you time in doing this.
Check my corrections here.
Teacher Liza
I have no way. because i feel severe heat in the summer.
>>I have no way to beat the heat during summer. Because I feel extreme heat in summer.
Korea are very humid in the summer.
>>Korea is very humid in summer.
>> OR: Korea is very humid during summer.
I just be inside turns on the air conditioner in my office.
>> I just stay inside and turn of the air conditioner in my office.
Also, I wearing short t-shirt and pants and wearing the sandals.
>> In addition I wear short, t-shirt, pants and I wear sandals.
Usually I go to the beach of east sea when send in the holiday with my family. I play the swim in the sea and sunbathe.
>> Usually I go to the beach of the east sea of Korea if it is holiday and I go there with my family. I play, swim and sunbathe there.
Thank you teacher Liza.
>> Correct
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