In the summer

2014-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

I have no way. because i feel severe heat in the summer. Korea are very humid in the summer. I just be inside turns on the air conditioner in my office. Also, I wearing short t-shirt and pants and wearing the sandals. Usually I go to the beach of east sea when send in the holiday with my family. I play the swim in the sea and sunbathe. Thank you teacher Liza.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ashley^^


I know that summer season is about to come in your country. I hope that you

will still find time to enjoy summer even if you can\'t bear the heat.

I will see you in class later my dear.

Thanks for you time in doing this.

Check my corrections here.

Teacher Liza


I have no way. because i feel severe heat in the summer.

>>I have no way to beat the heat during summer. Because I feel extreme heat in summer.
 Korea are very humid in the summer.

>>Korea is very humid in summer.

>> OR: Korea is very humid during summer.
 I just be inside turns on the air conditioner in my office.

>> I just stay inside and turn of the air conditioner in my office.
 Also, I wearing short t-shirt and pants and wearing the sandals.

>> In addition I wear short, t-shirt, pants and I wear sandals.
 Usually I go to the beach of east sea when send in the holiday with my family. I play the swim in the sea and sunbathe.
>> Usually I go to the beach of the east sea of Korea if it is holiday and I go there with my family. I play, swim and sunbathe there.
Thank you teacher Liza.

>> Correct

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