in the thirties..1

2011-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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Nowadays I have many things to think. I think it is because this year is the last one I am twenties. In this time, I am not sure what is the best choice or thought for my future. Getting money? Finding my life companion very actively? Studying for the stable social position? There are so many options to choose. Especially, in this fall and winter, five of my friends will get married. Whenever I get the wedding invitation cards, I don't think just congratulation. I think how much conviction do we need to decide to get married. But it is also true that I envy them and am worried about myself.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,       I think that this is the time of your life that you are in a dilemma. I hope you can find the right decision that will help you be happy in the end. Think carefully and decide righteously. See you!   Nowadays I have many things to think. >> Nowadays I have many things to think about.  I think it is because this year is the last one I am twenties. >> I think it is because this year is the last one that I am in my twenties.  In this time, I am not sure what is the best choice or thought for my future. >>At  this time I am not sure what is the best choice or thought for my future.  Getting money? >> Correct  Finding my life companion very actively? >>Correct/ Or [Continuously finding my life partner.]  Studying for the stable social position?  >>Correct  There are so many options to choose. >>There are so many options to choose from. Especially, in this fall and winter, five of my friends will get married. >> Especially, this fall and winter five of my friends will get married.  Whenever I get the wedding invitation cards, I don't think just congratulation. >> Whenever I get wedding invitation cards, I dont just think of congratulating them.  I think how much conviction do we need to decide to get married. >>Im thinking of how much coviction do we need in deciding to get married. But it is also true that I envy them and am worried about myself. >>Correct  

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