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2011-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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On this Chuseok, I met my ex-coworkers. We are five including me. We all are singles. One of them is thirty and another one is forty. I told them my concern and asked me some advice. They totally understood how I felt. Specially, The thirty ex-coworker had same question when she was at my age. She told me that just marriage is not the answer. The most important is what I am doing or What I am thinking. It was very impressive to me. Even though It is not my firsthand answer, It is the right key enough to lead me with full confident to myself. I need to remember that nothing is going to change next year on January 1st. Just bright Sun will rise as yesterday.

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Hi there again,      You had a brilliant answer from your friend. I also believe that getting married  is not the answer. Marriage is something that we have to be prepared of. We should be ready before comitting ourselves, and also asking if we truly see ourselves getting married to the person we are with right now. I pray that you will always be enlightened. Take care Ms. [Name]!   On this Chuseok, I met my ex-coworkers. >> This Chuseok, I met my ex-coworkers. We are five including me. >>We were five, including me. We all are singles. >>We were all single. [please remember parallelism in using your verb tenses]  One of them is thirty and another one is forty. >>Correct I told them my concern and asked me some advice. >> I told them my concern and asked for some advice. They totally understood how I felt. >>Correct  Specially, The thirty ex-coworker had same question when she was at my age. >> Specially, my ex-coworker who is thirty years old had the same question when she was at my age. She told me that just marriage is not the answer. >> She just told me that getting married is not the answer. The most important is what I am doing or hat I am thinking. >>What's important is what I am doing and what I am thinking. It was very impressive to me. >>CORRECT [or] it impressed me. Even though It is not my firsthand answer, It is the right key enough to lead me with full confident to myself. >> Even though it was not my firsthand answer, it is the right key enough to lead me with full confidence in myself. I need to remember that nothing is going to change next year on January 1st. >>Correct Just the bright sun will rise as yesterday. >>Correct  

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