In the today's class, the line is out of order.

2010-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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In the today's class, the line is out of order. I can not know what you say. When you have some problem, you speak more rapidly. Then I can not understand your speaking at all. Now, I am reviewing the lessons. I wanted to say that smoking is all bad and no good. I expressed that smoking is one hundred bad, no good ^^ I stopped smoking 15 years ago. In my exprience, his will is the most important thing to stop smoking. I expressed "will" to "decision" today. In my case, I had taken the drug to stop smoking. But it was no use. Only strong will was useful. Good night.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Congratulations once again for your success in quitting smoking. I think you should encourage more people to stop smoking. Anyway, about the line yesterday, I don't know what happened and I'm sorry for that but it's fixed now so it will not happen again.. Smoking is never good. It causes deadly diseases and I admire your will to quit smoking. You have done a great favor to yourself. Take care always.. I'll see you later!   Xoxoxo, T. Shy   Here are my corrections for you:   In the today's class, the line is out of order.>> In the today's class, the line was bad. I can not know what you say.>> I can't understand what you were saying. When you have some problem, you speak more rapidly.>> When you have some problems, you speak rapidly.Then I can not understand your speaking at all.>> Then I can not understand you at all. I expressed that smoking is one hundred bad, no good ^^>> I mean that smoking is one hundred percent bad and no good ^^ In my exprience, his will is the most important thing to stop smoking.>> In my experience, the will to stop is the most important thing to quit smoking. I expressed "will" to "decision" today.>> I mean the will to decide today. In my case, I had taken the drug to stop smoking.>> In my case, I had taken some medications to stop smoking.

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