In these days, bad mannered man don\'t bother me very often.
학생이 쓴 원문
These days are belong to spring.
The sun is prolonged and the sunset also is prolonged.
These days I spend my day working out to strengthen my body.
Bloomed flowers are faded and fall to ground and the leaves are more green.
Music is good to hear when I am working out on the park.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night.
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These days are belong to spring.
>> Spring is here.
>> Spring is here.
The sun is prolonged and the sunset also is prolonged.
>> We now experience the summer solstice.
>> We now experience the summer solstice.
These days I spend my day working out to strengthen my body.
>> These days, I spend my day working out to strengthen my body.
>> These days, I spend my day working out to strengthen my body.
Bloomed flowers are faded and fall to ground and the leaves are more green.
>> The flowers and fading and falling to the ground. The leaved are becoming greener.
>> The flowers and fading and falling to the ground. The leaved are becoming greener.
Music is good to hear when I am working out on the park.
>> Listening to music is really good when I am working out in the park.
>> Listening to music is really good when I am working out in the park.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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