In three to five sentences (3-5), talk about your \"worst day.\"
학생이 쓴 원문
There was days I felt lonely because I felt like nobody cares about me. Also, I did my best but the feedback or outcome was bad. The worst thing is after those happen I lie on my bed and just watching phone. And then I think even I can\'t do anything I\'m doing nothing.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ye [이름]! ^^,)
\" “We all have bad days, but one thing is true; no cloud is so dark that the sun can\'t shine through.”
Everybody has good and terrible days; whether they are brought on by pressing deadlines, financial difficulties, concerns about one\'s personal health, or interpersonal connections, having bad days is just a natural part of being human.
See you on Monday!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
There was days I felt lonely because I felt like nobody cares about me.
>>> There were days I felt lonely because I felt like nobody cared about me.
Also, I did my best but the feedback or outcome was bad.
>>> Also, I did my best, but the feedback or outcome was bad.
The worst thing is after those happen I lie on my bed and just watching phone.
>>> The worst thing is that after those things happen, I lie on my bed and just watch my phone.
>>> OR: The worst part is that I just lie in bed and stare at my phone when such things happen.
And then I think even I can\'t do anything I\'m doing nothing.
>>> Then I think that even though I can\'t do anything, I\'m doing nothing.
>>> OR: I then consider that even if I am powerless, I am still inaction.
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