In three to five sentences describe your city?

My city is Seoul.Seoul is a capital of the Korea.There are National Museum.I visit there many times.It has a various exhibition.And typical Gyeongbokgung Palace.Insadong is a nice place to buy something.You can eat stickicream and buy manything like colorful pencilcase and toy bow and so on.The popular amuseument park is Lotte World and Seoul Land.It has many interesting ride.I usually skate in the ice link in Lotte World.There are many things to visit in Seoul.

Hi there [이름],   Thank you for the composition. Seoul sounds really interesting from the way you described your city. kkk.   Anyway, most of your sentences are correct except for some errors that you can avoid next time like spelling of some words and subject-verb agreement. Review the corrections that I have made on your composition so that you can minimize having errors on this part. Just practice a lot [이름] because you are almost there.   Whatever you can do, or dream you can, begin it.  Boldness has genius, power and magic in it. 뻁ohann Wolfgang von Goethe Bye [이름]. Take care. See you again on our next class. ~~Teacher Liza My city is Seoul. >> CORRECT Seoul is a capital of the Korea. >> Seoul is the capital of Korea. There are National Museum. >> There are national museums. >> OR: There is a National Museum. I visit there many times. >> I visited the National Museum many times. It has a various exhibition. And typical Gyeongbokgung Palace. >> It has various exhibitions in the typical Gyeongbokgung Palace. Insadong is a nice place to buy something. >> CORRECT You can eat stickicream and buy manything like colorful pencilcase and toy bow and so on. >> You can eat ice cream stick and buy many things like colorful pencil cases, toy bow and so on. The popular amuseument park is Lotte World and Seoul Land. >> The popular amusement parks are Lotte World and Seoul Land. It has many interesting ride. >> It has many interesting rides. I usually skate in the ice link in Lotte World. >> I usually skate in the ice rink in Lotte World. There are many things to visit in Seoul. >> CORRECT