In what aspects of life is it easier being a girl/woman and in what aspects is it easier being a boy
학생이 쓴 원문
I am sometimes want to be a man as men are better than women in the power and physical aspects.
If I have men\'s power and physical abilities, there would be more options for the activities I could choose.
And men are more free from the safety. They can freely get around streets in the night.
When choosing the travel destinations and where to live, women are more care for the safety than men and it usually costs much.
I can\'t easily come up with the easier aspects for being a woman but it\'s very good that I can have many good girlfriends who carefully treat and think about me.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. It was awesome hearing from you again. I really had fun talking to you and reading your homework today. It is like the sequel to our conversation yesterday^^ Anyway, wonderful job once again. There were only a few corrections I made. Keep it up. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
I am sometimes want to be a man as men are better than women in the power and physical aspects.
>>> I sometimes want to be a man as men are better than women in the power and physical aspects.
If I have men\'s power and physical abilities, there would be more options for the activities I could choose.
>>> CORRECT =)
OR>>> If I have a man\'s power and physical abilities, there would be more options for the activities I could choose from.
And men are more free from the safety.
>>> And men are freer from danger.
OR>>> And men can protect themselves from danger.
OR>>> And men can keep themselves safe.
They can freely get around streets in the night.
>>> They can freely get around streets at night.
When choosing the travel destinations and where to live, women are more care for the safety than men and it usually costs much.
>>> When choosing the travel destinations and where to live, women prioritize safety more than men and it usually costs much.
I can\'t easily come up with the easier aspects for being a woman but it\'s very good that I can have many good girlfriends who carefully treat and think about me.
>>> I cannot easily come up with the easier aspects of being a woman but it\'s very good that I can have many good girlfriends who carefully treat and think about me.
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