In what circumstances should traditional or alternative medicine be used?

2014-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think that traditional or alternative medicine could be used either when symptoms are light or you already reached the last stage so that there is nothing western medicine could do. For instance, when you catch a cold, the traditional treatment like eating chicken soup could help to alleviate and cure the symptoms. When you have your ankle sprained, acupuncture can greatly help you cure it. Oriental/Chinese medicine has been taking place of Western medicine in large parts with more scientific reasoning and results backed up. When the situation is hopeless, you might also try alternative medicine or treatment. There are lots of reports that quite a large number of terminal patients have been recovered fully through various alternative medicine/treatment. Some escaped to a remote countryside in deep backwoods from the crowed and polluted city and lived there and dined only natural foods, avoiding processed foods. However, it is dangerous if you rely too much on your own ways.

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Hello there Sir [이름]! Yahoo! It\'s Friday! Our most awaited day. ^^ Hihihihi! I also sometimes believe in traditional medicine. Because there are some cases that can\'t be explained scientifically. But of course, being healthy and fit is the best way to avoid any kind of disease. Thank you very much for another meaningful and wonderful composition from you. Great job! Keep it up! Teacher Nina   I think that traditional or alternative medicine could be used either when symptoms are light or you already reached the last stage so that there is nothing western medicine could do. >> Correct For instance, when you catch a cold, the traditional treatment like eating chicken soup could help to alleviate and cure the symptoms. >> Correct  When you have your ankle sprained, acupuncture can greatly help you cure it. >> Correct Oriental/Chinese medicine has been taking place of Western medicine in large parts with more scientific reasoning and results backed up. >> Correct When the situation is hopeless, you might also try alternative medicine or treatment. >> Correct There are lots of reports that quite a large number of terminal patients have been recovered fully through various alternative medicine/treatment. >> Correct Some escaped to a remote countryside in deep backwoods from the crowed and polluted city and lived there and dined only natural foods, avoiding processed foods. >> Correct However, it is dangerous if you rely too much on your own ways. >> Correct

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