In what situation did you take a risk that wasn\'t worth it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I submitted my CV to many hospital regardless where there are located. The requirements were school report, English test score certificate and so on. I didn\'t study English for the test, I just took a test without any efforts. As a result, my score just meet the minimum requirement that the company asked to. Although my score was low, I tried to apply for many companies. I spent a lot of time to submit documents and to take a job interview. I should know that I didn\'t have possibility to get a job, if I didn\'t prepare the requirements.
I think that I wasted a lot of time for it and lost another chance.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. Thank you for making time to catch up on your homework ^_^ This is one you exerted much effort on and I appreciate it very much. Good job and have a good one today! ~ teacher Jane
I submitted my CV to many hospital regardless where there are located.
>>> I submitted my CV to many hospitals regardless of their location.
The requirements were school report, English test score certificate and so on.
>>> CORRECT =)
I didn\'t study English for the test, I just took a test without any efforts.
>>> I didn\'t study English for the test, I just took a test without exerting much effort.
As a result, my score just meet the minimum requirement that the company asked to.
>>> As a result, my score just met the minimum requirement that the company asked.
Although my score was low, I tried to apply for many companies.
>>> Although my score was low, I tried to apply to many companies.
I spent a lot of time to submit documents and to take a job interview.
>>> I spent a lot of time submitting documents and taking job interviews.
I should know that I didn\'t have possibility to get a job, if I didn\'t prepare the requirements.
>>> I should know that it was not possible to get a job if I didn\'t prepare the requirements.
I think that I wasted a lot of time for it and lost another chance.
>>> I think that I wasted a lot of time for it and lost another chance.
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