In what situations can stress be a good thing? Does stress ever make you feel more alive?
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There's no doubt that we face an enormous number of stresses in day-to-day living, whether it be at work, in the home, or anywhere in between. What we might find surprising is that contrary to popular belief, some stress can actually be a good thing. In fact, there actually are a few ways that stress, in moderation, can help us on an everyday basis. When we take a big exam, stress can help us keep focusing and improving our recall, which can be a plus when cramming for that test or preparing for an important presentation at work. But just as with anything else, only so much stress can actually help. Too much of it over an extended period of time can make our mind foggy and give us trouble recalling even the most basic of things. Stress can help boost our immune system. When we get sick, stress causes us to make hormones that battle threats to our health. Stress can help us get a leg up at work. Ever notice that you get the least amount done on days where you have the fewest deadlines?
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There\'s no doubt that we face an enormous number of stresses in day-to-day living, whether it be at work, in the home, or anywhere in between.
>> There\'s no doubt that we face an enormous number of stressed in day-to-day living, whether it be at work, at home or anywhere in between.
>> OR: There\'s no doubt that we face a lot of stressors everyday.
What we might find surprising is that contrary to popular belief, some stress can actually be a good thing.
>> Correct
In fact, there actually are a few ways that stress, in moderation, can help us on an everyday basis.
>> Correct
>> OR: In fact, there are few ways that stress in moderation can help us in our everday life.
When we take a big exam, stress can help us keep focusing and improving our recall, which can be a plus when cramming for that test or preparing for an important presentation at work.
>> Correct
>> OR: When we take a major test, stress can help us be focused and improve our memory which can be a plus factor when we cram for the test or a presentation at work.
But just as with anything else, only so much stress can actually help.
>> Correct
Too much of it over an extended period of time can make our mind foggy and give us trouble recalling even the most basic of things.
>> Correct
Stress can help boost our immune system.
>> Correct
When we get sick, stress causes us to make hormones that battle threats to our health.
>> Correct
>> OR: When we get sick, stress causes us to make good hormones that fight threats to our health.
Stress can help us get a leg up at work.
>> Correct
Ever notice that you get the least amount done on days where you have the fewest deadlines?
>> Correct
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