In what situations do you think it is necessary to be despotic? Support your answer/s.
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I think that I should be sometimes despotic when I treat my 2 year-old son. Except that case, I don't think that there would be rarely a chance to be despotic.
The first reason that I should be despot to him is that I should teach him a kind of social rules and he always tries to do whatever he wants. For example, he sometimes bites his sister when he is angry to her. In such a case, I should be tyrannical to him to correct his bad behaviors.
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It\'s nice to be back, [이름]!
I think every father has a despotic side. And not only fathers but also mothers, or should I say everyone?
How we put it into play is where the difference lies and can be interpreted in many ways.
In your case, is it only towards your son? How about your daughter? I am kind of sensing favoritism here.
Do you impose corporal punishment to your son at a very young age?
If not, how do you make your children understand that their behavior is improper?
Please answer my questions tomorrow.
Oh [이름], before I say goodbye here, you didn\'t write anything about the movie that you tried to share with me a while ago.
Is it all right with you to tell me the last part first thing tomorrow before we proceed to our next point of discussion?
A bunch of thanks!
Have a safe day [이름]!
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I think that I should be sometimes despotic when I treat my 2 year-old son.
>>Correct [2-year-old/two-year-old]
Except that case, I don\'t think that there would be rarely a chance to be despotic. >>Correct [there would rarely be]The first reason that I should be despot to him is that I should teach him a kind of social rules and he always tries to do whatever he wants.
>>Correct [I should be a despot to him]
For example, he sometimes bites his sister when he is angry to her.
>>For example, he sometimes bites his sister when he is angry with her.
>>For example, sometimes, he bites his sister when he is angry with her.
In such a case, I should be tyrannical to him to correct his bad behaviors.
>>Correct!
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