In what way can we help people to increase their motivation?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s too difficult question !!!
I think that the most important thing is hear their\'s story
And I show their\'s the most wonderful scene and movie, story.
And then I said \'You can do it!\'
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!^_^
I appreciate your time in doing your homework. You said it\'s too difficult, but you answered it anyway. By the way, I like your answer. Great job!^_^
I think that the most important thing is hear their\'s story
>>>I think the most important thing is to listen to their stories.
And I show their\'s the most wonderful scene and movie, story.
>>>I can show to them the most wonderful scene or story in a movie.
And then I said \'You can do it!\'
>>>And then say, \'You can do it!\'
OR>>>And encourage them by saying, \'You can do it!\'
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