In what way is learning English an adventure for you?
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Learning English is an adventure in that I have to keep trying continuously for me. I have to do a lot. I have to work and play the role of a wife and mom. In this busy situation, learning english hard is that I have to live busier. As time is limited, we have to choose and focus on something.Otherwise, I can do everything by reducing my sleep time.
For this reason, I wake up early in the morning around 5 a.m. o\'clock during the week.
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Learning English is an adventure in that I have to keep trying continuously for me.
>>> Learning English is an adventure for me because I have to keep trying continuously.
I have to do a lot.
>>> I have many responsibilities—
I have to work and play the role of a wife and mom.
>>> I work and play the role of a wife and mom.
In this busy situation, learning english hard is that I have to live busier.
>>> In this busy situation, learning English is hard because it means I have to live even busier.
As time is limited, we have to choose and focus on something.
>>> Time is limited, so I have to choose and focus on something.
Otherwise, I can do everything by reducing my sleep time.
>>> Otherwise, I could do everything by reducing my sleep time.
For this reason, I wake up early in the morning around 5 a.m. o\'clock during the week.
For this reason, I wake up early in the morning around 5 a.m. o\'clock during the week.
>>> That\'s why I wake up early in the morning around 5 a.m. during the week.
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