In what ways are dogs helpful to humans? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a dog for many years.
She was a Yorkshire terrier who named Minky.
I remember that I was happy with her.
When I walked my dog,we were communicating each other.
I felt she made me stabled.
In my experience,
a dog is helpful for human in part of mental health like emotional communication and stability.
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I had a dog for many years.
>> Correct
She was a Yorkshire terrier who named Minky.
She was a Yorkshire terrier who named Minky.
>> She was a Yorkshire terrier named Minky.
I remember that I was happy with her.
I remember that I was happy with her.
>> Correct
When I walked my dog,we were communicating each other.
When I walked my dog,we were communicating each other.
>> We often communicated with each other while taking a walk.
I felt she made me stabled.
I felt she made me stabled.
>> I felt that she kept me stable.
In my experience, a dog is helpful for human in part of mental health like emotional communication and stability.
In my experience, a dog is helpful for human in part of mental health like emotional communication and stability.
>> In my experience, a dog is helpful to humans concerning mental health like emotional communication and stability.
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