In what ways can help more people?
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I think that I can help more people in diverse ways.
First, I can help African children through donation to Unicef and so on.
And I can also do volunteer works in my town. For example at a nursing home or regional children center.
One more thing, I always try to do my best not to harm(damage) other people.
This is one way I help other people.
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In what ways can help more people?
I think that I can help more people in diverse ways.
CORRECT!
or>>In my opinion, I am able to help more people in so many different ways.
First, I can help African children through donation to Unicef and so on.
>>First, I can help African children through a donation to UNICEF, and so on.
First, I can help African children through donation to Unicef and so on.
>>First, I can help African children through a donation to UNICEF, and so on.
And I can also do volunteer works in my town.
CORRECT!
or>>Also, I can volunteer in my hometown.
For example at a nursing home or regional children center.
>>For example, at a nursing home or at a regional children center.
One more thing, I always try to do my best not to harm or damage other people.
One more thing, I always try to do my best not to harm or damage other people.
CORRECT!
or>>In addition, I often do my best in protecting and not hurting other people.
This is one way I help other people.
This is one way I help other people.
>>This is one way how I help other people.
or>>This is my way of helping other people.
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