In what ways can plastic can be useful and helpful to us?
학생이 쓴 원문
Plastic is not just as bad. Of course, using too much plastic can be very bad for the planet\'s environment, and the soil can be contaminated and the environment in trees can live can be improperly created. However, if plastic is completely gone, it can cause great difficulties in people\'s daily lives. Because people have already started to use plastics and adjusting to it. So, if plastic is gone, the environment will be bad, but our daily life can be very difficult and uncomfortable, so we need to use plastic in moderation and throw it away so that the environment doesn\'t get dirty.
강사 첨삭
Good evening to you Maria!
We have been told that the use of plastic is evil and it destroys the environment in many ways. While this is true, we cannot also deny the fact that there are so many ways in which we use plastic. If we think about it, we are surrounded by so many things made out of plastic.
So, we have to continue limiting the use of plastic or recycling it so that we can lessen the heat of the earth by releasing Carbon Dioxide and Carbon Monoxide in the process of producing plastic.
Thanks Maria. Rest well and see you again in class tomorrow. You\'re the BEST!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Of course, using too much plastic can be very bad for the planet\'s environment, and the soil can be contaminated and the environment in trees can live can be improperly created.
>> Of course, using too much plastic can be very bad for the planet\'s environment, and the soil can be contaminated and the environment and trees that live can be improperly treated.
However, if plastic is completely gone, it can cause great difficulties in people\'s daily lives.
>> Correct!
Because people have already started to use plastics and adjusting to it.
>> People have already started to use plastics and have adjusted to it.
So, if plastic is gone, the environment will be bad, but our daily life can be very difficult and uncomfortable, so we need to use plastic in moderation and throw it away so that the environment doesn\'t get dirty.
>> So, if plastic is gone, the environment will be in good condition, but our daily lives can be very difficult and uncomfortable. So we need to use plastic in moderation and throw it away so that the environment doesn\'t get dirty.
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