In what ways can tourism help improve a country\'s infrastructure?
학생이 쓴 원문
If some country have a popular tourist spot, the country may need public transportaion and hotel.
Like this, tourism can motivate make more infrastructure.
강사 첨삭
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If some country have a popular tourist spot, the country may need public transportaion and hotel.
>> If a country has a popular tourist spot, it may need more public transportation and hotels.
Like this, tourism can motivate make more infrastructure.
>> In this way, tourism can encourage the development of more infrastructure.
>> If a country has a popular tourist spot, it may need more public transportation and hotels.
Like this, tourism can motivate make more infrastructure.
>> In this way, tourism can encourage the development of more infrastructure.
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