In what ways did you obtain real satisfaction when you were on vacation?
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I don\'t know real satisfaction. Because I thought that I feel satisfied when I get some rest at my home.
But I regret that I did nothing special. I should have done something special like a traveling or studying.
Especially these days I don\'t have a long vacation because of a work.
So I feel that it is so important to plan my vacation that mixed with something special and some rest.
By following my vacation plan, I obtain real satisfaction.
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Hi, Ian.
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with what you\'ve said, enjoying, at the same time resting, is something that we can say that\'s satisfying.
-T. Caitlyn
I don\'t know real satisfaction. Because I thought that I feel satisfied when I get some rest at my home.
>> I don\'t know what real satisfaction is because I already feel satisfied just by resting at home.
But I regret that I did nothing special.
But I regret that I did nothing special.
>> However, I also regret it because I did nothing special.
I should have done something special like a traveling or studying.
>> I should have done something special like traveling or studying.
Especially these days I don\'t have a long vacation because of a work.
Especially these days I don\'t have a long vacation because of a work.
>> Especially these days, I don\'t have long vacations because of work.
So I feel that it is so important to plan my vacation that mixed with something special and some rest.
So I feel that it is so important to plan my vacation that mixed with something special and some rest.
>> So I feel that it is so important to plan my vacation which includes both; doing something special and having rest.
By following my vacation plan, I obtain real satisfaction.
By following my vacation plan, I obtain real satisfaction.
>> By following my vacation plan, I can achieve real satisfaction.
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