In what ways do your interests influence your goals?
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Someone\'s interests and hobbies influence thier goal.
Because, when we are thinking about something, we tends to relate other categories. it\'s interaction.
If a rich is my final goal, I should study about economy.
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Someone\'s interests and hobbies influence thier goal.
>> Someone\'s interests and hobbies influence their goals.
OR >> A person’s interests and hobbies can shape their goals.
Because, when we are thinking about something, we tends to relate other categories. it\'s interaction.
>> When we think about something, we tend to relate it to other areas—it\'s all connected.
If a rich is my final goal, I should study about economy.
>> For example, if becoming rich is my ultimate goal, I should study economics.
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