In which area would you prefer to live, rural or urban?
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I prefer the rural area. When I was a child, I had lived in the rural area. When I had a plan to go to a urban place, I tried to find out how to get there and make a time table. After visiting the place, I was exhausted. I don\'t like a crowded place. If I have a plan to visit a urban place and meet a new person. It makes me crazy. I love spending time in nature with coffee. The best place is under a tree. Can you imagine that, you are sitting in a chair under a tree on sunny, windy day, and drinking a cup of coffee. It is the best vacation ever.
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Hi Kin Il [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I prefer the rural area. When I was a child, I had lived in the rural
area. When I had a plan to go to a urban place, I tried to find out how
to get there and make a time table. After visiting the place, I was
exhausted. I don\'t like a crowded place. If I have a plan to visit a
urban place and meet a new person. It makes me crazy. I love spending
time in nature with coffee. The best place is under a tree. Can you
imagine that, you are sitting in a chair under a tree on sunny, windy
day, and drinking a cup of coffee. It is the best vacation ever.
>> I prefer the rural area. When I was a child, I had lived in the rural
area. When I had a plan to go to an urban place, I tried to find out how
to get there and make a time table. After visiting the place, I was
exhausted. I don\'t like a crowded place. If I have a plan to visit an
urban place and meet a new person, it will make me crazy. I love spending
time with nature drinking coffee. The best place is under a tree. Can you
imagine that, you are sitting in a chair under a tree on sunny, windy
day, and drinking a cup of coffee. It is the best vacation ever.
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