In winter….
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In winter, it snowed and froze, so the roads were slippery. Be careful not to fall. Also, if you are outside for a long time on a snowy day, your shoes will get wet and you will be exposed to the cold for a long time, so you are more likely to get frostbite. Also, when it\'s cold, it\'s easy to catch a cold. You should also be careful of colds.
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~ Teacher Tricia
In winter, it snowed and froze, so the roads were slippery.
>>> CORRECT!
Be careful not to fall.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, if you are outside for a long time on a snowy day, your shoes will get wet and you will be exposed to the cold for a long time, so you are more likely to get frostbite.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, when it\'s cold, it\'s easy to catch a cold. You should also be careful of colds.
>>> CORRECT!
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